Nicely done, John!And thanks for compliment of starting off the slideshow with a couple snapshots from my very brief (4 lines only!) poetry recitation. I'll presume to append here the lines I recited -- they comprised the first two couplets of a ghazal, but also form an independent rubai (quatrain), as I hastily realized when asked (while moving up to the microphone) to cut down my reading from 10 to 2 couplets. :-)cheers,d.i.ps: ah, but [speaking of memory], I only now recollect 3 of the 4 lines! (In a future-cyber-comment round, I'll hopefully slip in the missing line.)= = = = = = =What was once desire becomes the crush of memorywhat was once a fire becomes the ash of memory. . . . . ...what was once high-wire becoms the lash of memory
pps: now I recall the 3rd line too. :-)Here's the full quatrain, then:What was once desire becomes the crush of memorywhat was once a fire becomes the ash of memorythe call of doves the cry of crows have different affectswhat was once high-wire becomes the lash of memorycheers,d.i.
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Nicely done, John!
And thanks for compliment of starting off the slideshow with a couple snapshots from my very brief (4 lines only!) poetry recitation. I'll presume to append here the lines I recited -- they comprised the first two couplets of a ghazal, but also form an independent rubai (quatrain), as I hastily realized when asked (while moving up to the microphone) to cut down my reading from 10 to 2 couplets. :-)
cheers,
d.i.
ps: ah, but [speaking of memory], I only now recollect 3 of the 4 lines! (In a future-cyber-comment round, I'll hopefully slip in the missing line.)
= = = = = = =
What was once desire becomes the crush of memory
what was once a fire becomes the ash of memory
. . . . . ...
what was once high-wire becoms the lash of memory
pps: now I recall the 3rd line too. :-)
Here's the full quatrain, then:
What was once desire becomes the crush of memory
what was once a fire becomes the ash of memory
the call of doves the cry of crows have different affects
what was once high-wire becomes the lash of memory
cheers,
d.i.
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